‘Moonraker’ – The Film Script That Never Was

Screen Shot 2014-02-21 at 4.40.55 PMShortly after handing over an early manuscript of Moonraker to William Plomer, Ian Fleming told him:

“In my opinion it isn’t much of  a book, but it should make a good film.”

How wrong he was to be as it turned out. A film version never materialized in his lifetime and when it did, it bore little resemblance to his classic book.

The book came out in 1955 was a departure from the previous two novels [Casino Royale & Live and Let Die] as it was entirely set in Fleming’s native England – Kent and London to be exact. Fleming’s own haunts were referenced or pseudonyms were used: Bridge at Blades – substituted for Whites Club; Golfing at Sandwich; The White Cliffs and Cafe Royal in Dover; lunches at Scott‘s; or driving down the A20 to St. Margaret’s Bay;

It was as if it was written right out of Ian’s diary.

“Bond did a racing change and swung the big car left at the Charing Fork, preferring the clear road by Chilham and Canterbury. The car howled up to eighty in third and he held it in the same gear to negotiate the hairpin at the top of the long gradient leading up to the Molash road….accelerating down the stretch of road past Chilham Castle…Bond took the short cut out of Canterbury by the Old Dover Road and looked at his watch. It was six-thirty. Another fifteen minutes to Dover and then another ten minutes along the Deal road.”

The White Cliffs of Dover

The White Cliffs of Dover

Ian Fleming’s long weekends ran from Friday afternoon to Monday night and were invariably spent at St. Margaret’s where Ian and Ann Fleming hosted friends such as Somerset Maugham, Noel Coward, Evelyn Waugh, Patrick Leigh Fermor and the Duff Coopers. Fleming wanted to write his most ambitious and personal novel yet, realizing he had to keep Bond fresh. Perhaps he was trying to establish more respect amongst the literary elites or revered spy novelists such as Graham Greene and Eric Ambler?

He kept things close to home not just in the locations but in the character of Bond – to many, one of the most autobiographical of all his novels. The Cambridge Spies affair was also a possible inspiration for the villain Drax – a Soviet defector – “the traitor within”. The Secret Service were still smarting after the defection of Kim Philby.

The Moonraker novel also gave us one of the best Bond girls in Gala Brand, who does not fall in love with Bond or get into bed with him. Bond reflected at the end of the novel:

“And now what? wondered Bond. He shrugged his shoulders to shift the pain of failure – the pain of failure that is so much greater than the pleasure of success. The exit line. He must get out of these two young lives and take his cold heart elsewhere. There must be no regrets. No false sentiment. He must play the role which she expected of him. The tough man of the world. The Secret Agent. The man who was only a silhouette.”


Edward Biddulph also pointed out that:

“Fleming’s novel, Moonraker (1955), holds the clues to his involvement in Operation Crossbow and the search for German rockets. It cannot be denied that the novel, featuring as it does Nazi scientists and a V2-like rocket, took inspiration from wartime events.”

After reading the proof, Fleming’s pal Noel Coward gushed:

“It is the best thing he has done yet, very exciting and, although as usual too far-fetched, not quite so much so s the last two and there are few purple sex passages. His observation is extraordinary and his talent for descriptions vivid. I wish he would try a non-thriller for a change; I would so love him to triumph over the sneers of Annie’s [Fleming] intellectual friends”

Screen Shot 2014-02-21 at 4.41.18 PMCoward also reminded Fleming that the original title ‘The Moonraker’ had been used before by F. Tennyson Jesse. He was actually incorrect it would turn out. Other titles put forward at the time included: The Moonraker Secret, The Moonraker Plot, The Infernal Machine, Wide of the Mark, The Inhuman Element, Out of the Clear Sky, Hell Is Here and Mondays Are Hell.

From The Spectator review of the book in 1955 by Juanita Sheridan:

“The particular adventure into which he is plunged is not one of Mr. Fleming’s best and is further marred by a series of improbabilities culminating in a piece of poetic justice (involving the relative speeds of a submarine and a guided missile) that is just damned nonsense.

No, it is on the character of Bond himself that the book has to rely. […] The world of Moonraker is tough, anarchistic, and without belief; Bond, as the supreme egoist, the ultimate individual, survives because of those qualities, and because he is accidentally, almost casually, on the right side.”

One of the most memorable scenes of any Fleming novel is the Bridge scene at Blades. The New York Time’s Anthony Boucher said: “I don’t know anyone who writes about gambling more vividly than Fleming”. 

Kingsley Amis in his Last Words on Ian Fleming article also praised it:

“One cannot forget Moonraker (1955) for the vivid, rounded depiction of its villain, Hugo Drax, and what is probably the most gripping game of cards in the whole of literature.

White's, London

White’s, London

Rank Organization and the Aborted Lift Off

Curtis Brown offered $1000 for the a 9 month option on Moonraker plus $10,000 if produced, while publishers Jonathan Cape were discussing another deal with Rank. As a result, legal action against Cape but they pushed back on the TV rights and ultimately Brown pulled out. With matters still stalled, Ian Fleming grew frustrated with Rank’s script department and wrote a version of the script himself as he had visioned it would be when he wrote the novel. He remarked:

“The reason why it breaks so badly in half as a book is because I had to more or less graft the first half of the book onto my film idea in order to bring it up to the necessary length”

When the Roger Moore Moonraker film was released in 1979, it bore very little resemblance to the novel apart from the title and the use of Drax as the villain. In my view, it turned out to be a non-sensical send up of Bond. Elements of Moonraker were also used in the 2002 film Die Another Day – also rubbish with Blades being the club in the film.

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So the burning question is – Where is Ian Fleming’s Moonraker script now?

Could Fleming’s script have been the greatest Bond film ever made? Imagine the famous car chase – 007 in his souped-up Bentley pursuing Sir Hugo Drax in his 300 S Mercedes – is one of the most thrilling scenes Ian Fleming ever wrote. Bond first chases Drax down Ebury Street – where Fleming lived and (where  Sir Hugo Drax would also live) all the way onto the A20 to Dover, on which he eventually loses his Bentley.

We may never know.

Incidental Intelligence

674ac7728cdd4facfa9e39a5b68efb39Moonraker Novel – Wikipedia

From Kent With Love (The Daily Telegraph)

Is there a lost Casino Royale film adaptation written by Ian Fleming?

Moonraker: the forgotten 1956 James Bond film (Fictional)

The Moonraker Route


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